First off, I like the setting of this scene, on the shore of a lake with the sun setting, reflecting it's light off the clouds and the water. Another thing I like is that the whole scene is alive and active, like at the end of a long day all the Pokémon take a brake to relax and play. I also like all the small details put in, like Gulpin eating what I think is a cupcake, and Gardevoir (the Pokémon that always protects it's Trainer) staying by it's Trainer's side. The Trainer's design looks pretty cool to me, and I think the whole drawing portrays the scene very well.
This is actually my first critique, I hope I critiqued fairly.
welcome! ^^ you're awesome at drawing ;w;, btw, just something I want to see you do XD, not drawings or anything but XD, some person that my friend told me asbout did something as a journal entry of what she thought of all her watchers, could you do that for me plz? ;w;